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How to correct a flawed composition

I created my original painting around this time last year, having been inspired by the vast fantasy landscapes by artists like Dongbiao Lu and Ruxing Gao. It was my first stylised environment artwork. 

A year later I was interested to see how I could improve the piece. There was something very successful about it that was most likely a happy accident at the time, but had continued to evade my understanding until now. 

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The original painting (click the arrow to see the improved version)
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The improved composition (click the arrow to compare with the original)

The improved composition (click the arrow to compare with the original)

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